SAT Writing Practice Questions

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Which course of action most improves the following sentence?

HR had turned into such a bureaucratic mess that it was impossible to determine whose responsible for paychecks being issued a day late.

  1. Change bureaucratic to beureaucratic.
  2. Remove the word that.
  3. Change paychecks to pay checks.
  4. Change whose towho was.
Explanation

Answer: D - The sentence is most improved by changing whose towho was. Whose is a possessive; “whose responsibility” could be correct.

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