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Category - Composition

Which course of action most improves the following sentence?

Tom Brady is one of the NFL quarterbacks who has won more than one Super Bowl.
  1. Insert a comma after quarterbacks.
  2. Lowercase Super Bowl.
  3. Change has to have.
  4. Fix the parallel structure.
Explanation
Answer:C - The sentence is most improved by substituting have for has. Think of it this way; Tom Brady is a member of a group, the group of quarterbacks who have won more than one Super Bowl.
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